有没有语法错误?一句话At that time in Shanghai,it has no boundaries,people from all over the.At that time in Shanghai,it has no boundaries,people from all over the world are discussing the changes here,not only the environment more health,and construction is getting better and better.Shanghai expo brings me a lot especially on my impression of china which a more and more beautiful city.还有这句。

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有没有语法错误?一句话At that time in Shanghai,it has no boundaries,people from all over the.
At that time in Shanghai,it has no boundaries,people from all over the world are discussing the changes here,not only the environment more health,and construction is getting better and better.
Shanghai expo brings me a lot especially on my impression of china which a more and more beautiful city.还有这句。

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not only the environment is more healthy,but construction is getting better and better.