what’s that in your bag?That's my new tie.Please show your new tie for me.有没有错误?
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what’s that in your bag?That's my new tie.Please show your new tie for me.有没有错误?
答
没有语法错误，但是前面的that可以省略，后面用it指代new tie，这样显得没那么啰嗦
what’s in your bag? That's my new tie.Please show it for me.
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有。what's that in your bag的that可以去掉；show your new tie for me 应该为to me
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for改成to
show sb sth=show sth to sb