短文改错 one early morning ,i was clearing the thick snow in the front of our house when suddenlyi found a little bird,that was obviously hurt.i took one home and took care of it.i even had it treating in an animal hospital.day after day the little bird was getting better and better in her great care.my parent were so kind as to support me.they believed that i developed my patiences and love by taking care of the little bird.since the bird is well enough

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短文改错 one early morning ,i was clearing the thick snow in the front of our house when suddenly
i found a little bird,that was obviously hurt.i took one home and took care of it.i even had it treating in an animal hospital.
day after day the little bird was getting better and better in her great care.my parent were so kind as to support me.they believed that i developed my patiences and love by taking care of the little bird.since the bird is well enough ,my parents and i set it free on warm day and let it return to nature.

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