检查是否有语病 Once I try to understanding you and accept your love.I just don't wanna hurtOnce I try to understanding you and accept your love.I just don't wanna hurt you.I afraid one day I will leave you .It will be a great strick to you.So,I decide to leave you now.But your behavior made me so unfirm with my decision.

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检查是否有语病 Once I try to understanding you and accept your love.I just don't wanna hurt
Once I try to understanding you and accept your love.I just don't wanna hurt you.I afraid one day I will leave you .It will be a great strick to you.So,I decide to leave you now.But your behavior made me so unfirm with my decision.

Once I try to understand you and accept yout love. I just don't wanna hurt you. I'm afraid one day i will leave you. It would be a great strick to you. So, I decide to leave you now. but your behavior makes me so unfirm about my decision.

Once I try to understanding(要用原型) you and accept your love.I just don't wanna hurt you.I (增加am)afraid one day I will leave you .It will be a great strick(打击的单词不是这个,应该是
STRIKE) to you.So,(不需要逗号)I decide to leave you now.But your behavior made me so unfirm (没有这个单词,你可以使用confused疑惑,Uncertain不确定的)with my decision.
即可以更改为:
Once I try to understand you and accept your love.I just don't wanna hurt you.I‘m afraid one day I will leave you .It will be a great strike to you.So I decide to leave you now.But your behavior made me so uncertain with my decision.
补充:请三思再决定分开,不要错过每一个爱你的人和你爱的人.