英语作文 Have a picnic急!

On saturday,my mother,father and me were go to the patk.We have a picinc.My mother bought some food .For example,some juice ,three sandwiches,a jar of jam ,some sweet ,and seven piece of bread .We are very happy.
中文大意：在星期六，我的妈妈，爸爸和我去公园 。我们去野餐。我的妈妈买了一些食物。例如，一些果汁，三个三明治，一瓶果酱，一些糖和七片面包。我们很开心。

On Saturday,my mother,father and I went to the park.We had a picnic.My mother bought some food .Such as,some juice ,three sandwiches,a tin of jam ,some candy ,and seven pieces of bread .We were very happy.

Today is Sunday,It is sunny outside,I had a picnic with my family.There many food to eat:cakes,fruits and many the other foods.After we ate things,We flew the kite.At about 5 o'clock,We went back home.Today all of my family had a good time!
今天是星期天,外面阳光明媚,我和我的家人们野餐.有好多东西吃哦：蛋糕,水果和很多其他的食物.吃完东西后,我们去放了风筝.在下午5点左右,我们回了家.今天我们全家人都玩的很开心!