she took a great interest in Chinese culture.This is also the reason for her coming to China.这句话是否正确?若果不正确应该怎么改使句意保持不变

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she took a great interest in Chinese culture.This is also the reason for her coming to China.
这句话是否正确?若果不正确应该怎么改使句意保持不变

Because her great interest of Chinese traditional culture, she comes to China.
(你的句子也很好哦。我只是把他们连在一起而已。)

可以改得更漂亮些:
The reason that she took interest in Chinese culture prompted her trip to china.

写得蛮不错的,可以用.