短文改错 l should tell you that l need some helps from you.lm going to take part in the chinese talent show for foreigners in beijing in coming summer vocation.you know you have been learning chinese painting in the past two years andlm also good at singing,so l planned to show these talent.now lm really greatly need of two teachers whom are professional to guide me so that l can get a good grade.and l want l could top in the first three places.
短文改错 l should tell you that l need some helps from you.lm going to take part in the chinese talent show for foreigners in beijing in coming summer vocation.you know you have been learning chinese painting in the past two years andlm also good at singing,so l planned to show these talent.now lm really greatly need of two teachers whom are professional to guide me so that l can get a good grade.and l want l could top in the first three places.
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I need a favor from you. I am going to take part in the Chinese Talent Show for foreigners in Beijing this summer. I know you've been gifted in Chinese painting and I am good at singing. I think we could have a try on showing these talents. Now, we really need to find two professional teachers to guide us so that we could get better score in the competition and I aimed to be in top 3.
l should tell you that l need some ( help) from you.l'm going to take part in the chinese talent show for foreigners in beijing in ( the ) coming summer vocation.( I ) know you have been learning chinese painting in the past two years and l'm also good at singing,so l (am planning) to show ( this ) talent.now ( I ) really need ( the help ) of two teachers ( who ) are professional ( enough) to ( give ) me (adivce) so that l can get a good grade.l (hope) l could ( reach ) ( one of ) the first three places.