我想问一个英语短句 In this era,number of people are increasing who believe learn new skills and knowledge can directly help him that have a chance of work and promote of chance.这个句子有错误的地方吗?在哪里?那应该怎么样改呢?

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我想问一个英语短句
In this era,number of people are increasing who believe learn new skills and knowledge can directly help him that have a chance of work and promote of chance.
这个句子有错误的地方吗?在哪里?那应该怎么样改呢?