关于my teacher的英语小短文单词要有30个以上

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关于my teacher的英语小短文
单词要有30个以上

I love XXX , she is my X X X teacher. . she always really nice to me and never give us alot of home work. .
she looks around 23 with big eyes and black long hair. . everyong loves her. .
not only beacuse of her beatiful looking also beacause she is always kind just like our big sister, and she explains everything very well. .
i love the subject beacuse of her ,her i worked hard for it . .

She is humorous and also plays all sorts of games with us in class.We like her very much because she is not only our teacher, but also our friend forever. Although she is strict with us during the class, she is always with a smile on her face. Her class is always lovely and interesting.
我对以上的句子做了修改,这二句在上面是错误的,

My English is XXX.She is young and nice.She has big eyes,a small mouth and a round face.She is humorous in her classes.She usually plays all kinds of games in her class.So many students like having her classes.She is not our teacher,but our friend.We like her and she is our good teacher ,but our friend.We like her and she is our good teacher and good friend for ever.
Although He is strick with us in studying.Usually he is always happy with a big smile .Sometimes he is very serious and sometimes he is funny.His class is always lively and interesting.

以上的文章有不少语法错误
我姑且改一下
My English teacher is XXX. She is young and nice. She has big eyes, a small mouth and a round face.She is humorous in class. Playing all sorts of games with us in class, she enjoys tremendous popularity among all the teachers. We like her very much because she is not only our teacher, but also our friend, for ever and ever.
Although she is strict with us during the class, she is always happy with the smile on her face. Her class is always lively and interesting.