英语语法 Please allow me to introduce myself for you 检查Please allow me to introduce myself for you.My name is xx,my 20-year-old,was born in Qinghai Province.Very honored to have this opportunity to come here to interview.Now I will briefly introduce themselves.I graduated from the Qinghai first vocational schools.My specialty is computer software applications.In the past year I have the basic expertise.I like reading books,watching movies,listening to mus

第一句的用法有点问题，一般向某人介绍谁，是用 introduce to，而不是for。
my 20-year-old，was born in Qinghai province，改为：20 years old， and come from Qinghai province.
专业用 major而不是 specialty。
语法和词汇问题有点多。。。。。

my 20-year-old 改为I'm 20 years old and I was born...
下面句可以改为It's pleasure to have this opportunnity to come here for interview.
Now I will briefly introduce themselves??这句是干吗的？去掉吧。把It's pleasure 放开头 然后“请允许我介绍”放第二句。
In the past years I learned the basic expertise.In my spare time,I ....and so on.
I am an honest and optimistic guy who is a suffering and patience worker.
Thank you for your attention.That's all.

Please let me introduce myself.My name is xx,20-year-old,was born in Qinghai Province.i'm very honored to have this opportunity to come here .Now I will briefly introduce the details.I graduated from the Qinghai first vocational schools.My specialty is computer software applications.In the past years I had the basic expertise.I like reading books,watching movies,listening music,and so on.I think I am an honest and optimistic,and also work under the pressure.This is all,thank you.

没搞明白你是让做什么的！