请哪位老师帮改一下英语作文,十分感谢!Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet. On the one hand, blogs can be the windows for students to show theirselves to others. It’s also a good way to relax theirselves from the pressure of study. However, on the other hand, many parents and teachers think it is a waste of time and energy to manage a blogs. It will delay the study of students. In my opinion, It

请哪位老师帮改一下英语作文,十分感谢!
Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet. On the one hand, blogs can be the windows for students to show theirselves to others. It’s also a good way to relax theirselves from the pressure of study. However, on the other hand, many parents and teachers think it is a waste of time and energy to manage a blogs. It will delay the study of students. In my opinion, It is a good way to show oneself. The opening of students’ blogs can help the owners have more confidence. The blogs without the influence of students’ Study should be encouraged.