初一英语作文：my favorite foodEating is a very impotant part of our life.Food can make me happy.For breakfast,I like Whole-wheal bread and beanmilk,they are healthy food .For lunch,I like rice,beans,potatoes,beef and soup.I always eat very full.For dinner,I like pasta.My mom’s pasta is very nice.My favorite fruit is orange.But I don’t know what’s my favorite food—I like all delicious food!大家帮我看看有什么错误!
初一英语作文：my favorite food
Eating is a very impotant part of our life.Food can make me happy.For breakfast,I like Whole-wheal bread and beanmilk,they are healthy food .For lunch,I like rice,beans,potatoes,beef and soup.I always eat very full.For dinner,I like pasta.My mom’s pasta is very nice.My favorite fruit is orange.But I don’t know what’s my favorite food—I like all delicious food!
大家帮我看看有什么错误!
hi，牛头。老师也让你写了？也让偶写了！（我是不是跑题了~？？）
这篇作文应该要略有改动：Eating is a very important part of our life. Food can make me happy. For breakfast,I like Whole-wheal bread and soy milk ,they are healthy food . For lunch,I like rice, beans,potatoes,beef and soup. I always eat very full.For dinner,I like pasta. My mom’s pasta is very nice. My favorite fruit is orange. But I don’t know what’s my favorite food—I like all delicious food!
（提示：把impotant改成important，不要漏写一个r；把beanmilk改成soy milk ）
what’s my favorite 改为what my favourite food is.