请大神帮我修改下英语作文.Currently,the number of people who take the college entrance has been decreasing.But yet choice the vocational education is increasingly common.This phenomenon has exerted heated debates concerning “which education is the best”.They indicate that people’s opinion vary in a big way.Some people believe that vocational education has an advantage to job-hunting.While others argues that college diploma is more important.I’m one of the members
请大神帮我修改下英语作文.
Currently,the number of people who take the college entrance has been decreasing.But yet choice the vocational education is increasingly common.
This phenomenon has exerted heated debates concerning “which education is the best”.They indicate that people’s opinion vary in a big way.Some people believe that vocational education has an advantage to job-hunting.While others argues that college diploma is more important.
I’m one of the members who choice the college education.First and foremost,the college has more and better teachers,more and better environment.Besides,obtain a higher degree such as master’s degree,one has to go through college education to get the bachelor’s degree first.The last but not least,although it hasn’t advantage to job-hunting.It has a considerable upgrade space when you get the job than the vocational education.
Nowadays,the number of the university entrant has declined,while more people chose vocational education in colleges.
This phenomenon has captured public attention and become a hot debating topic:which education is better,university or college.Some believe taht the vocational education has a advantage for job-hunting.While other argue that a university diploma is more important to the student.I prefer university rather than vocational education in colleges.Firstly,the faculty team in universities are stronger than colleges,and the teaching environment in universities are better than colleges too.Secondly,students who want to obtain a master degree must take the bachelor degree first.My last reason is that although some people consider that the university education is not so helpful to find a job ,I do think the university students will have more chance for their further development even for finding a better work place.
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