过去式的英语作文,上个月,上个周末你做了什么,用first·next·Later on·finally等词连接70个单词左右

My friends and I went to a place called Albany in last weekend. It took us five hours to get to there. Firstly, we went to the renting house and leave our stuff. Then we went to the beach and got our lunch. Later on we driven to the beach and caught some abalone. The beach was amazing and great fun. We all enjoyed it so much. At the end we cook some meals included the abalone by ourselves. The dinner was so delicious and we all enjoy it.
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I had an interesting weekend last week.First,i joined the basketball game and our game won the first,so wonderfull!Next,i did some shoping with my best friend.we had a good time.Later on,when i got home,our family had a big dinner,and father praised me about my performing in the basketball game.Finally,i got a call from my unkle,he said he would visit our family and bring me a big gift,how great!
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