英语句子书写It is vividly depicted in the cartoon that a pan of flower is growing very well under the shield of the warm house .这副画生动的描绘了一盆花在温室的保护下生长的非常好.那句英语句子中有什么错误吗?

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英语句子书写
It is vividly depicted in the cartoon that a pan of flower is growing very well under the shield of the warm house .这副画生动的描绘了一盆花在温室的保护下生长的非常好.那句英语句子中有什么错误吗?

找不出错误

flower 应当变复数(一盆花,显然不是一枝)
water前面的the 改为a(温室也是首次出现,应当用不定冠词)
愚见,供参考.