good morning teachers,my name is Zheng Xi.l am from Chen xi number 1 Middle school.l am16 years old .As for my habit I l

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good morning teachers,my name is Zheng Xi.l am from Chen xi number 1 Middle school.l am16 years old .As for my habit I love flying,because l like the sense of floating in the blue sky.now I have the opportunity to realize my dream,if I will get this chance,I will try my best to do it,Although l am not good at English,I will learn it well in the future,Not only I like smile,but also enjoy my life.l hope the teachers can give me this opportunity

文法有些错误需要帮你改吗?好哦Flying是指?梦想?还是说你喜欢高空飞翔梦想是吧?This opportunity 是指⋯哪个good morning teachers, my name is Zheng Xi. l am from Chen xi number 1Middle school.l am16 yearsold .My dream is to fly, because l like the sense of floating in the blue sky and traveling trough the clouds. now I have the opportunity torealize my dream, if my dream come true, I will try my best to do it.Although l am not really good at English,I will learn try my best to learn it in the future! I like smiling and enjoy my colorful life. l hope the teachers can give me this opportunity.good morning teachers, my name is Zheng Xi. l am from Chen xi number 1Middle school.l am16 yearsold .My dream is to fly, because l like the sense of floating in the blue sky and traveling trough the clouds. now I have the opportunity torealize my dream, if my dream come true, I will try my best to do it.Although l am not really good at English,I will learn try my best to learn it in the future! I like smiling and enjoy my colorful life. l hope the teachers can give me this opportunity.这个错了不好意思~有地方没注意到没事你帮我改下然后尽量剪短一点good morning teachers, my name is Zheng Xi. l am from Chen xi number 1Middle school.l am16 yearsold .My dream is to fly, because l like the sense of floating in the blue sky and traveling trough the clouds. I like to smile and enjoy my life. Thank you这样呢?这个可以,就这样的短,然后大概内容说到了就行嗯 那就这样吧也不要太少了你可以帮我读一遍吗?然后翻译一下帮你改好了啊哦好回家读行不?大概6点在车上头有点晕好的没事我是要去面试然后要基本的口语,我英语太差了所以就要麻烦你了面试啊?干嘛的在车上头有点晕到家了就这样~慢慢练习吧好好学喔加油好的,面试紧张呀为甚麼要面试啊?干嘛的好吧 总之加油晚安嗯嗯。谢谢你