英语作文句子~

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英语作文句子~
I‘m writing to complain about my air conditioner which I purchase in your store that it made too much noise when the maching operated 可以这样写么?

将原句里的purchase in 改成purchased from,that改成because,when the machine operated改成when the machine is operating就可以了.也就是说写成:I'm writing to complain about my air conditioner which I purch...