Her eyes were fixed on her plate and in a short time,she was busy eating.标点是不是错误

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Her eyes were fixed on her plate and in a short time,she was busy eating.标点是不是错误
没有连词 两句完整的句子 当中是不是应该用句号?

如果 time 后面的逗号改放在 plate 后面,句子会比较清楚:Her eyes were fixed on her plate, and in a short time she was busy eating.这句子相等于Her eyes were fixed on her plate, and soon she was busy eati...