几个英语改错题

几个英语改错题
we have to hand a book report next week
can you pick up your friend in that team
i am afraid you'll have to go with milk in tea,we have no milk left
they waited in all night
the question is if he has finished it or not
putting in the sun,ice-cream will melt quickly
many animals and plants threatened with extinction
she ended her speech by thank the audience
i don't know how doing the work
instead of shaking hands,they kiss to his friend when they are talking
my english is so poor that i can;t make myself understand
it is clear that most are aimed sales promotion
this gold watch has been passed in to him from his father and grandfather
pop music is popular with people,but it is not in everyone'staste