给一篇英语作文,求大神找找有没有语法、单词用法上的错误和改善的地方

给一篇英语作文,求大神找找有没有语法、单词用法上的错误和改善的地方
My Best Holiday
In the last year,I went to a place that I always hope I can go there.My parents、our friends and I went there by ship .Ittook us about 2 hours to get there.
Now,let's reveal the secret.This place is *.
I heard there's lots of delicious food .So the first day,we went to the snack street.We visuted Yonghe City and tasted the Yonghe soya-bean milk.the feeling was very cool.then we ate the carb custards.The taste made us wanto eat more and more……
The main of this trip was coming.We went to the One Piece theme park.
First,we had fun on the Sunny ship There're many Nami's orange trees.Then,many cartoon characters was coming.Such as Shanks、Luffy、Chopper……I couldn'd believe my eyes.They made me get very excited.I couldn't stop taking photo with them.I thought it will be the best time of this day.
Next,we did some shopping about One Piece toys.I love them very.
MY trip seems to go faster,but ai least,I had a fantastic time there.