大家能不能帮忙看下如下句子是否有问题
问题描述：
大家能不能帮忙看下如下句子是否有问题
I worry about that the lifetime of the chip will be reduced because water molecules and other elements which are dissolved in water can damage the devices if they spread into the substrate.
答
可以修改如下：
I am afraid that the lifetime of the chip will be reduced because water molecules and other water soluble elements, when spread into the substrate, can damage the devices.