求英语作文：Your opinion on following the fashion

I do not think it is of great importance for us to keep up with the flow of fashion.Because everyone is unique .we all have our own way to show our personality .Even though fashion may bring us a feeling of cool ,still it doen't last long.With the time passing by,this will be in the memory of people.That is my opinion towards this topic.可以再长点不？？非常感谢Also,flowing the fashion will cost us a lot of money.Based on my knowledge,I can find plenty of evidence to support the view that some young people lose themselve when keeping up to date.可以了吗？