请问下面这句语法上没错吧?但我觉得很别扭!

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请问下面这句语法上没错吧?但我觉得很别扭!
Therefore,we should raise public awareness,and we need to educate the younger generation.让它省略些东西或添加点东西,

Therefore,we should raise public awareness and educate the younger generation.