英语短文改错,就10个错误

英语短文改错,就10个错误
When I was in the junior middle school,I didn't have any
good friends.As a result,I often feel lonely.Now as
a senior middle school student,I want to make a
change.I want to have any good friends.But I'm not
good at deal with others,which means I don't know
how to make friends.Last week,when I was taking a
walk,a girl of my age at the playground walked toward
me.She seemed very nicely.I hope she would be my
friend,and I didn't have the courage talk to her.What
I wish someone would give me some helpful advices!