我这句英文写的对不对

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我这句英文写的对不对
There are enormous amounts of trees which have been cutted down every year so that it cause a great degradation on our ability of preventing the sandstrom.

这个句子问题多多啊.你这句的意思是:很多树每年都被砍掉,目的是导致我们减少防止沙尘暴的能力.so that表目的,不宜用在此句.cutted应该改成cut.不是这些树每年都被砍,而应该是每年都有很多树被砍.应该改成类似这样的句子:Each year lots of trees have been cut down.As a result(Consequently),our ability to prevent sandstorm has been weakened.