2007年上海英语中考作文：things i hate to do 看看有没有什么语法错误?改一改 如果总分20分,给几分

2007年上海英语中考作文：things i hate to do 看看有没有什么语法错误?改一改 如果总分20分,给几分
Most of the time i do things which i enjoy.However,there are still things i hate to do.（已给开头）
I`m always against smoking because i have suffered from it for several years.And i also hate to tell lies ,nobody likes dishonest people.But most of all ,i extremely hate to get tired of study.First,it does harm to the future.You will get failure only if you don't focus on your study.In addition ,That's a shame if you lose interest in study which consists of both difficuties and fun."Idleness is the root of all evil".this is the motto i never forget .