请问这句话有语法错误吗?Cry with laughing in childhood,while laughing with crying when grown up

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请问这句话有语法错误吗?Cry with laughing in childhood,while laughing with crying when grown up
如果有错误的话,应该怎么改?

Cry with laughing in childhood,while laugh with crying in adulthood.