下面几个句子哪些地方错了?怎么改?

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下面几个句子哪些地方错了?怎么改?
What are these?These are apples.
Mum,they are my friends,jim and Mary.
Your picture is very good.
No,it,s not good .
They are Jane,s grandparent.
Are they your uncle?
Here are my English book.
That isn,t me father.
is your uncle Tom?

What are these?They are apples.
Mum,they are my friends,Jim and Mary.
Your picture is very good.
No,it,s not good .
They are Jane,s grandparents.
Are they your uncle?
Here are my English book.
That isn,t my uncle.
is your uncle Tom?