hello Tom.It's been a long time I haven't see you.I miss you so much.I wish that I can go to Beijing together.I love you

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hello Tom.It's been a long time I haven't see you.I miss you so much.I wish that I can go to Beijing together.I love you~.
请问这段英文奇怪吗?
如果有错请修改 谢谢

Hello Tom.I haven't see you for a long time. I miss you so much.I wish We can go to BeiJing together.I love you~.
我帮你修改了一下. 这样更加顺一点.望采纳.