怎么感觉这句子后面怪怪的?

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怎么感觉这句子后面怪怪的?
For example,to achieve a degree, you will have developed skills in communication, team work and commitment, and also you learn to become independent and responsible
后面的you learn to 我怎么觉得要加个will ,you will learn 或者是把you去掉啊~~?

这是一个并列的句型,两个句子都应该是一般将来时,前面的句子改为,you will have to develop 后面的句子改为  and also learn to   去掉you ...