帮我改改英文作文谢谢!
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帮我改改英文作文谢谢!
Hello my headteacher. I’ m Johnny. I have some suggestions about our school. One of them is our library when a lot persons in the library the wifi often doesn't work and other one is our hostels some hostels without balcony. Finally is our basketball courts I think is not enough. Thank you for your time. I am looking forward to your reply
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1One of them is our library----First of them is about our library.2when a lot persons in the library --When there are lots of peple3and other one is our hostels --And the second one is about our hoste...