英文句子找错
问题描述：
英文句子找错
I’m *** from ***.Today I feel so glad and also very lucky to be here to learn from other friends and also give my speech on such a beautiful day!
Well,I 'm fifteen now.And I think my hobbies just like a colorful spring.I like to read books and write articles.I like to draw pictures.And as many teenagers,I like to play computer games.I also like to play sports.I can swim well.
I 'm a happy and outstanding girl!Thanks for you listenning~
看下有没语法错误,
有错或不好的地方麻烦各位帮我修改下哈~
答
语法错误没什么大问题,可是我建议你重写一份,因为演讲要求句子简短,而且要避免重复使用某个单词,你文中的like使用太多,可以用同义词代替,如enjoy ,be into 等