there are many around us who need our help 这句话有没有语法错误,如果有该怎么改

问题描述:

there are many around us who need our help 这句话有没有语法错误,如果有该怎么改

嗯,一看看去就有错误.
【分析】
1、缺少宾语,也就是所谓的“内容客体”.
句子翻译成:在我们身边有许多(东西或者事物)需要我们的帮助.
你这里就漏掉了宾语“事物”.
2、定语从句的关系词用错,不能用who.
3、修改句子
there are many things around us which need our help.there are many people around us who need our help.对不对这个就对了,O(∩_∩)O哈哈~,希望采纳