she asked her dog to hold a piece of paper that she had written the following in it and take it to the butcher's.这句话有错吗?

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she asked her dog to hold a piece of paper that she had written the following in it and take it to the butcher's.这句话有错吗?错的地方在哪里

去掉it ,定语从句的重复.