能帮我看一下我这句英文写得对不对,谢谢

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能帮我看一下我这句英文写得对不对,谢谢
Would you please send the file to sally cc to me on or before 19 Oct (next Monday), thanks.
中文是:请你将这个文件发给Jenny 抄送给我在10月19日或之前.谢谢

你可以这样写:
Would you please send me the file to Sally and CC to me by 19 Oct,thanks.Use by to replace on or before