英语作文,请问各位同学老师我这篇英语作文有没有错,哪里错了,请以一一指点,我会改进的
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英语作文,请问各位同学老师我这篇英语作文有没有错,哪里错了,请以一一指点,我会改进的
Do you know Laughing Cat Diary?
Laughing Cat Diary is very fun book.
If you not looks laughing cat diary?
You should looks laughing cat diary.
If you is children?
You should very like.
Laughing Cat Diary relly is young and old's like book.
Because i read laughing cat diary .
You come look?
答
Laughing Cat Diary is very fun bookis后面加 a
If you not looks laughing cat diary?改为If you don't watch laughing cat diary,
You should looks laughing cat diary 改为should look
If you is children? 改为 If you are children
You should very like改为You should very like it
Laughing Cat Diary relly is young and old's like book.
改为Laughing Cat Diary is relly young but old to like abook