麻烦修改英语作文

在不在 , 要在的话我帮你写 你追问 , 十分钟搞定 ,你加分,妹子英语研究生在读在，你要多少分没事你采纳就行 我在写呢Dear tom:how do you do?how is everything going on with your life?I wanna tell you something that you might be interested in.I know u are running a online store,as I have made some Chinese knots,I want to request you to do me a favor that is cooperate with me to sell those items,is it okay with you?Chinese knot is often used to express good wishes，their plam-size make them looks tasteful,it's red color with the gold side and it's made ofwool,refering to the price,how about 10RMB for each one?If you feel interesting about it, I will tell you more details later. looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes for you.yours,Lihua不好意思，我不是让你写范文呢，我是让你修改我的文章，我先采纳你把。麻烦修改我的文章，指出哪里错误即可，不需要重写。啊。。。。。喵。。。。。好吧。。。。第一句应该是long time no see,I want to tell you a message 也不准确 ，妹子就是留学生 ，这是中式英语，没人这么说的 ，直接i want to tell you something/a news,.I made some Chinese Knot-knots in past 3 months-in the past 3 months that I want to give you -so that i want to give them to youto sell in the Internet.--on the internet//The Chinese Knot is 0.2 metres-s去掉 and it made for wool-made of.It looks comfortable.-这看上去很舒服？你用我上面那句吧their plam-size make them looks tasteful 他们巴掌大小的尺寸让他们看起来很雅致。oh,it’s red.In Chinese the Knot is the syboml of happiness-in china,the chinese knot......The price of the Knot is 10 RMB.How?-how is it？it’s very cheap.//Do you want to sell it?-it 改themI will give you 3 days to think it.-think about it.Please write to me if you want to sell it.-please reply me......I think it will be sell out queit in America. -sold out quickly