Last February,I was on holiday in Beijing with my family.One morning,I was sleeping

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Last February,I was on holiday in Beijing with my family.One morning,I was sleeping
soundly while I was woken up by a suddenly cry of my sister,"It's snowing." I got up quickly,
dressed me and opened the window.Wow,I couldn't believe in my eyes.Everything including
trees,roofs and grass were covered with thick snow.In distance I could see lots of cars,like small
white box,moving slowly on the road.I could also see some lovely birds flying happily in the
snow.How a beautiful sight!I became exciting because I had never seen snow before.In no time,
I ran out with my camera and take many photos to record my first experience of snow.改错,救命,在考试

Last February, I was on holiday in Beijing with my family.One morning, I was sleepingsoundly 【while--when 】I was woken up by a 【suddenly--sudden】 cry of my sister, "It's snowing." I got up quick...