请高手帮我修改下这篇英语作文,是否有语法和句式错误
请高手帮我修改下这篇英语作文,是否有语法和句式错误
There are many kinds of transportation.For example,riding a bike,driving a car,walking and so on.For most of people,they prefer driving a car to riding a bike.They think driving a car is more faster and comfortable than rading a bike.But I'd like to riding a bike.Though it's easy to feel tired,it can help us to keep fit.
And it won't bring air polution.Do you agree with me?
1.most of people应该为most people 或者 most of the people
2.more faster and comfortable 中faster已经是比较级了,所以不能加more而应该加much,comfortable是多音节词因此比较级加more是对的.因此应改为much faster and more comfortable
3.would like to do所以应改为But I'd like to ride a bike.
4.好像现在分词短语不能作句子(只有在生活英语或口语中才会用的)所以For example,riding a bike,driving a car,walking and so on.这个句子你可以改一下,加上谓语和(宾语)或者加上系表结构.好像不太好加其他成分。在for的前面用逗号隔开,后面的不改,可以吗如果这是一篇正式作文的话还是改一下的好,不加谓语和(宾语)或者系表结构的话,你可以改为There are many kinds of transportation like riding a bike, driving a car,walking and so on.O(∩_∩)O~