初中作文的要求

初中作文的要求
There are lots of problems about teenagers .Marry is a shy people .she doen't know what she should do and say in party .i think she should offer to have a word with some kind pepole .Sherry didn't fell alepp before exam .Tanks to she tired,she didn't take a good marks.I suggestion she should go to walk and dirnk milk before go to bed .And don't watch TV wchich make she excited
会减多少分着作文.
译文是这样的：
这里有许多关于青少年的问题。
Marry是一个害羞的人，他不知道在聚会上应该说什么和做什么
我认为他应该主动和一些友善的人说话
sherry在考试前不能入睡
由于她累。他不能有很好的成绩
我建议她应该去散步并且和一些牛奶在他睡觉之前
并且不要看是她兴奋的电视
【九年级期末考的作文】