求看这两个英文句子表达是否正确
求看这两个英文句子表达是否正确
By the way,it is Nokia,so you know,it has a fantastic quality.割割割 As for the goods which you used for exchanging,I hope it is a series of books ,or a MP4 which has a huge screen.
劳烦看下第一句可以这样表达么?so you know,可以这样放吗?还有就是,我很纠结第二句中,it is a series of books,这边应该要用复数吧,要they are a.那下面那个单数的MP4又该怎么表达呢?好乱,希望看得懂.
has a quality 貌似是中国式翻译,应该说它的质量很好so you know是比较口语的表达,美剧里应该出现过,可以这么说吧第二句是想说要对方交换的东西是一个系列的书或是一个带大屏幕的MP4?这里时态貌似有点错误,应该说的...那你用来交换的东西要怎么表达。。。我以为usd for doing 是固定搭配呢。。可以这样讲吗？ As for the goods which is used for exchanging with me. 还是 as for the goods which you use for exchanging就好了？use一般是及物动词，后面要接名词，，这里名词调到了前面，用which代替了，，use sth. （for doing） 不一定后面要跟for doing，，as for the goods which is used for exchanging，，，with me 可以不用加，不过根据上下文决定，如果是对话，双方应该清楚说的是什么，可以省略，简洁点，，后面的说法应该没问题，，平时可以多翻翻词典，有很大帮助、、、