改错 10处i am writing to talk about the canteen of our school.There are only a few stand in the canteen,leading to lots of
改错 10处i am writing to talk about the canteen of our school.There are only a few stand in the canteen,leading to lots of students have to line up for food.It is waste of time,isn't it?But at times the food is not fresh and does not taste deliciously.So it's not surprising that some students chose to go to the street to buy junk food which do harm to their health.Would you think about that how to improve it?I would appreciate you if you could take some measures.Hopefully,my opinion can be taken to account.改错 改十处
stand--stands
have--having
waste--a waste
deliciously--delicious
chose--choose
do--does
去掉that
you--it
could--can
to account--into accountbut 改成and是的, but 改成and.could 就不用改成can了.。。当时你怎么不这么改T T当时由于错把could改成了can,一数总的错误已经有10个,就以为没有错了,所以就没有再认真检查了.