帮我看看这英语作文有哪些地方有问题~
帮我看看这英语作文有哪些地方有问题~
作文要求:
1.我们要时刻注意预防疾病.如果你病了,请及时治疗,以防传染.
2.不要喝未烧开的水,不干净的水很容易使人生病
3.不要吃过期食物,确保餐具干净
然后作文 ..
Today we found out many kinds of disease．They made our body not
health.Although maybe we will die of them ．So we need find some ways
to help our body health．Wemust pay attention to our body whenever．
If there is anything strange．You must cure it at first time．Don't
drink the water not boiling．Dirty water is easy to make you feel
not well．Don't eat food that over the time．Some food that over
the timecould let you get disease．Be sure that your dishes and
bowls are clean．Before your meal,washing hands,keep these habits
above,the diseases must far away from you!
Today we found out many kinds of disease． (diseases)
They made our body not health.(unhealthy)
Although maybe we will die of them ． (We will even die because of them)
So we need find some ways to help our body health． (keep healthy)
Wemust pay attention to our body whenever． (We must) (all the time)
If there is anything strange． (seems strange)
You must cure it at first time． )
Don't drink the water not boiling． ( which isn't boiled)
Dirty water is easy to make you feel not well.(Dirty water could make you feel unwell easily.)
Don't eat food that over the time． (passed the best day before)
Some food that over the timecould let you get disease． (You will contract disease from some of the overdates food)
Be sure that your dishes and bowls are clean． ( Make sure)
Before your meal,washing hands,keep these habits above,the diseases must far away from you!)