帮忙修改一篇英语演讲稿

帮忙修改一篇英语演讲稿
Ladies and Gentlemen,Good afternoon!
As we all know,in 2008 Beijing Olympic Games will be held,every person are eagerly looking forward to its arrival,carefully exploring the life of the details,we can easily see that the Olympic spirit is everywhere.
Between neighbors,we help each other; colleagues,in addition to competition,everyone has even more made on the friendship of the first.Everyone has to start with oneself,the protection of the surrounding environment.Olympic atmosphere is diffuse in my home,parents have taken attention from the message of the Olympic Games,all brothers and sisters from time to time to talk about the various stories related to the Olympic Games.
Everyone is on the Olympic Games has its own expectations,and I also believe that China will certainly be able to better organize the Olympic Games and win honor for our country
I am proud of being a Chinese.I hope my country to be much stronger.I look forward to 2008,I will say to the world aloud:Welcome to Beijing.
Let’s bless for the Olympic Games 2008 in Beijing
That's all.Thanks for your listening.
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