短文改错,Dear tom It is six years since you came to our city for a visit .Great chang...

短文改错,Dear tom It is six years since you came to our city for a visit .Great chang...
短文改错,
Dear tom
It is six years since you came to our city for a visit .Great change have been taken place in our city .Now the street is much wider and more beautiful .Tall building can be seen everywhere .Thanks for the efforts made by the government to fighting pollution ,the public and it's a nicely place to take a walk and have some fun.But weare living a very happy life now.Ihope you can come to up city again in the near future.Ibelive you'll enjoy your stay there.
Yous,
Yang Bin
本文共10处错误文章除了结尾的Yours是笔勿以外还有开头的Tom以外，其余还有10处错误，要全文修改并回复！记住是全文！