可以帮我修改一下这篇作文吗,我是高三的,
可以帮我修改一下这篇作文吗,我是高三的,
Wanting to win money by luck,most of our school students,especially boys,are addicated to the ball game betting.In the meantime,it is a bad way for them to seek for excitement.As we known,students who take part in the bets almost have no economic revenue,which may drive them to crime.What's more,sometimes the students can't focus their mind on studying,making the school work be influenced.Not only should we read more encouraged articles in order to improve our metal requirements,but also we should stay away from guys who are always losing themselves in ball game betting.这是五句话作文.因为本人的英语水平有限,可能会出现多出语法错误,麻烦大大们帮我找出来.另外如果可以用一些高级句式和高深词汇代替就最好了,
Want to win money by luck!most of our school students,especially boys,are addicated to the ball gambling. In the meantime,it is also a bad way for them to seek for excitement.As we known,students who take part in such activity almost have no economic revenue,which may drive them to commit a crime.What'more,sometimes the students can't focus their mind on study,making the school work influenced.Not only should we read more encouraging articles in order to improve our
spirit,but also should we stay away from guys who are always losing themselves in ball gambling.