the hunter found a panda on it own,and took it home (请将错误画出并改正)

问题描述:

the hunter found a panda on it own,and took it home (请将错误画出并改正)
if the doctor comes too late,the children will lose his life(改为一般疑问句)

第一句是把第一个it 变成his
表示猎人自己找到了熊猫
第二句是把his life 改成 their life
life作为生命是不可数名词
will the children lose their life if the doctor comes too late?