英语短文改错This afternoon in my way to the cinema,I saw a case falling ofe a man's bike .I shouted

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英语短文改错This afternoon in my way to the cinema,I saw a case falling ofe a man's bike .I shouted
This afternoon in my way to the cinema,I saw a case falling ofe a man's bike .I shouted
the man to stop全部错误!

1.in my way-------on my way
2.ofe拼写错误
3.shouted +to/for her to stop
4..I shouted 之前加一个So或者then就舒服些了.三句感觉是小学生写的.