五年级英语自我介绍,60个单词左右

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五年级英语自我介绍,60个单词左右
Hello everyone!My name is Zhangqian.I am this year eleven years old.I come from taizhou siom elementary school. I'm is a very lovely and clevergirl. I love English、drawing pictures and music because. I'm good at these. After listening to my introduction. Willing to make you my friend?这样写,怎么样?
谁能帮我修改修改?

总体来说写的不错,参考参考我写的吧!(我认为我写的还可以~)P.S.你最好稍微的修改修改.我的语法不太好.Hello everybody!I want to make friends with you.Now,let me first introduce myself.My name is XX and i I...