写你家地址用到along right road street meter crossing turn staight bridge

Go along the King Road and turn right on the first crossing,then you will be on the Greenwill street.Go straight ahead and you will see a bridge not far away.You cross the bridge,and go another 100 meters.At that time,you will see our house.有些地方好像有点不通顺，请帮我改改Go along King Road and turn right at the first crossing, then you will be on the Greenwill Street. Go straight ahead Greenwill Street for about 200 meters and you will see a bridge . After you cross the bridge, you can see my house on your left hand. You cannot miss it.Go straight ahead Greenwill Street for about 200 meters 中的Greenwill Street 能否去掉呵呵，应该可以。